Poem. 10 points best answer.?

I think it was good. But I think (please don't get mad) what makes poetry different from prose is not the verses, the rhymes or the metres, but the use of literary symbols and vivid imagery and not just simple narration. Although great works in poetry are narrative in form, I think your readers will be more amazed if your poems are mysterious but not too mysterious that your readers may not know what message you are trying to convey. And when they read something good, they also feel good. I also make poems (lol), so if you might want to compare poems or stuff just drop a message. Good poem. Good.